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Wit'ch Gate: Immortal Magic - Infinite
Vengence (The Banned And The Banished Book 4) by James Clemens
pub: Orbit/Times Warner. 530 page paperback. Price:
£ 6.99 (UK). ISBN: 0-84149-197-7
check out website: www.OrbitBooks.co.uk
and www.TimesWarnerBooks.co.uk
Elena
has come of age sooner than expected. The forging of the powers
that the wit'ch has to her advantage and the bonding of the Blood
Diary have made Elena older than her years.
As head of a resistance to the Dark Lord, her discussions with
the combined nations are struggling to gain ground and Elena finally
realises that it is action that will win the fight not idle talk.
She and the companions that have followed her on her journey thus
far have to follow different paths.
The
four Weirgates must be destroyed to not only cause a rift in the
Dark Lord's source of power but also to release the dark elemental
power of Chi. The Blood Diary has enlightened Elena to Chi's continued
torture within the Weir and Cho has entrusted the wit'ch to the
task. This the fourth book in 'The Banned And The Banished' series
and sees the characters leading their own paths destined for individual
goals.
They cannot rely on Elena in every fight that they become involved
in, for she has her own destiny to fulfil and none of the adventurers
will ever be the same after their journeys to the Weirgates. I haven't
had a good relationship with the James Clemens saga of 'The Banned
And The Banished', the second and third volumes were terrible. I
did come at this book a little closed-minded, but I have to admit
that in this one the writing has begun to get far better.
This one is far shorter than the other books in the series. The
style is tighter and explained with more clarity. None of this over-detailing
of events that had been such a bane. The fast-paced style really
works well. The characters also seem to have formed better individuality.
They now don't seem to have fuzzy edges that merge into one another.
Their motivations are more defined which serves the reader well.
This I think is due to the cleaner cut edit that has happened and
the divergence of the quests into smaller groups. What surprised
me most about this volume was the fact that Clemens seems to have
found his funny bone, taking it from over-serious writing to warm
emergences of humour in times of trouble. This makes for better
dialogue between the characters, adding wit and irony to their weapons
of sword and magic.
The story sadly still has its undeniable foibles. Again, Clemens
has put in twists and turns which are quite clever there is no denying.
However, the twists are so quickly explained that they only serve
as tasty morsels that pass down your throat too quick to savour.
The touches of good fantasy writing are there, but they are unavoidably
overshadowed by a style that bends towards cliché rather than originality.
There is still that element of cheesiness.
One of the points that have always put me off with Clemens' writing
is the introductions to his books. He uses characters telling of
people/students going mad from reading the scrolls of the Wit'ch.
The problem with this idea is that it puts an awful lot of pressure
on the author to deliver the goods. He is weighting his own writing
against him.
If those tacky little introductions were removed, these books
would take on a new light for many readers. This is down to the
point I made earlier about humour in the book, because it takes
itself too seriously in this way you immediately start laughing
at the absurdity of it all.
All in all, a better book than the previous but Clemens still fails
to envelop the reader in his storytelling and thus fails to provide
a good read. Let's hope the final instalment fulfils where this
one has dared to tread.
Donna Jones
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